Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Daily Blog Post

Dystopia: A ruined future
Sight
We were trying to get away, away from the disasters that we passed, we hopped in our car and started for the highway, as we looked ahead, the traffic was massive. We weren't the the only ones trying to get away from the Nuclear Meltdown. We saw people scrambling on top of other cars. Out of nowhere, a massive explosion rattle the ground and shook all the cars surrounding. The cars' suspension couldn't handle it. As the car bounced around, the peoples faces were shocked and scared.

Sound
Someone on the other side of the car suggested that we wind down the windows, as they were halfway down, we had to wind them back up because of the sirens blurting out they're loud "WEEWOO".
Smell
The windows didn't even make it down to halfway because the stench was so bad. It smelled of death, something that was lurking and its breath just breathing on us all, so that he can get the pleasure of trapping us in his horrible smell.

Taste
I could nearly taste the foul breath of the thing that was lurking above. It was horrible, we all bclasped our hands on our mouths and begin to breath. The person next to me was starting to hyperventilate and eventually passed out. Then we all slipped into oblivion, not knowing what was going to happen next.

2 comments:

  1. It's good but its a story and you needed to do a description

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  2. Conor, you went back and finished off your dystopian piece today and it is really fabulous. You have mastered the idea of describing using all of your senses. What is fabulous is the vocabulary you have chosen to create the dystopian tone: words like oblivion, hyperventilate, meltdown, explosion, foul.

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